Wandering one day,
A beautiful girl,
Around the place of lakes,
Out of all Rush,
She came from London,
Towards this placid region,
Where everything seemed,
No less than heaven.
For quiet a time,
She felt the touch,
Of an ambiance- calm and tranquil,
She behold the beauty,
Sometimes while wandering about,
Sometimes while standing still.
With her serene-filled eyes
She explored a cottage,
Surrounded by the green,
And while staring at it,
She saw an old lady,
Catching her sight,
Then and there,
The lady invited her,
Inside her lovely dwelling place.
Picking up the vibes,
Of a delightful greeting,
She stepped inside,
The cottage which looked pretty,
Where the lady welcomed her,
Like She is her own granny.
To pamper the girl,
In all the possible way,
She displayed the gesture,
Stuffed with love,
Which made the girl feel drenched,
In and out- under the love-shower,
Which Provided her an exquisite warmth.
The gesture of an old lady,
Left the girl contemplating,
Because the word "Thanks",
Proved to be a minnow,
In front of love,
The lady showcased.
When asked to her inner voice,
The girl came with an idea-
"Lets cherish the moment,
And make it more colorful"
Said the girl quietly to herself.
Without wasting a second,
She grabbed a paper,
And started sketching,
The whole surrounding,
Including the cottage,
Powered with an aura of love.
To add a brightful season,
She painted using water colors,
At last to garnish the sketch,
On paper then it looked,
A beautiful love-patch.
-Monu Awalla
(Note: The painting which I pasted above this poem is painted by the same friend of mine whom I mentioned in this poem and the cottage in the painting is the same which I discussed here)
27 comments:
very interesting monu... colorful and bright... it brought peace to my mind as i read... :)
@Melissa- O really! Thanks Melissa..:)
lovely poem....n the painting is too good...she is one talntd girl...n the words u gave to the paintin n her...too good..:)
i loved the painting as well as poem.capturing a sweet charm and splendid memories it made my smile wider ..
the painting just catches the mind, eyes stick to the beauty. the real life incident is captured so well in a poetic thought and expressed through words.........unbelievable, Monu. loved the poem.
@Vaisakhi- thank u sooo much.. I'm touched.. so sweet of u to say that :)
@Anu- thanks Anu for such a sweet & lovely comment...:)
@Sancheeta- O Sanch.. u made me smile dear.. wat else cud I say.. loved your comment too..
You have already got appreciations from the Genuine Poets here.... so nothing much from me required here......
'BEAUTIFUL'
thank u Irfan ji.. I can really feel your comment.. thank u so so much..:)
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She sketched so well and you have done the same job with your words ................... beautiful :)
One of ur best poems
@ Terry- thanx for visiting & reading my blog.. special thnx for the Versatile blogger award.. It will definitely boost my confidence :)
@Geeta- Thank u again for your lovely comment.. your comment is always a delight :)
@Jerly- Really! I'm overwhelmed with your comment dear.. :)
Itz was awesum.. specialy d paintng :-D
@Saumya- thanks a lot Saumya.. keep visiting.. :)
Whoz the Lucky-one Moni?, i always LOVE to hear what u feel...You Tittled this Poem is really exquisitely beautiful!!!!
@Mahi- thnx.. I too love you comments anyways.. :D
Once we recognize what it is we are feeling, once we recognize we can feel deeply, love deeply, can feel joy, then we will demand that all parts of our lives produce that kind of joy...You are amazingly good,and the sketch is simply beautiful...Whoever this girl is,she is going to be a lucky one,because she will have a man in her life,who is going to give his all....<3
What a lovely picture - I see it and it fill me peace and happiness - beautiful indeed : ) Following you now.
wnderfull compilation of nature beauty... !!! gr8 :)
@Alpana- Your words always are like love-river where love keeps flowing..<3
@Kriti- Thank u soo much & u'r most welcome..
@Wisdom- thank u for ur compliment..
lovely poem
Very endearing piece of writing.....great!
@Alpana- U made me smile..lots of luv <3
@Kriti- thank u very much indeed my dear friend..
@Wisdom- thnks for the compliment..
@sm- Thank u so much for visiting & liking my words..
@Nishi- thank u for ur lovely words dear..
great looking blog you have! really enjoy it! hope u return the visit and do the same..
lovely lines...nicely crafted words!
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