In the world around you,
To see you smile,
To see the blink of your eyes,
For I know its so beautiful,
Like colorful butterflies.
Those who don't know,
The wonders of friendship,
Didn't meet you,
At all my dear,
For those who met,
Unconditionally know,
The hold of love,
The word carries.
A spark you are,
That enlightens,
Me from within,
An intimate friend,
Hard to find,
In the world of duals,
With current trend.
You are a realization,
Gentle and pure,
Like a midas touch,
In the life of others,
A drop of love,
Seeping through the soul,
So as to turn,
A man into a human.
Your friendship means,
A life in itself,
A ride of emotions,
I always loved,
But nothing I can say,
In these lines few,
An oceanic feeling,
Which I carried through.
- Monu Awalla
21 comments:
Aww monu its soo cute n beautiful!
N it carries depth innocently.
<3 <3
i look at your dreams
the feathers that fly
i glide with your soul
and sing a lullaby
you bring into me
white jasmine cool breeze
a freshness of life
bathing whispers of friendship
under the sun even in moon light.
@ Mani- thank u soo much dearo.. <3 <3
@Sancheeta- hmm.. quiet an attractive lines.. thank u for such a sweet feedback... <3
I am so happy to see to here after such a long time..and with something so beautiful...loved it from my heart.
Hello.
I'm visiting from the group Bloggers.
Beautiful sentiments for a special friend indeed.
My favorite lines "A drop of love,
Seeping through the soul,
So as to turn,
A man into a human."
Nice imagery.
Thanks for sharing.
My blog:
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Nice. So much emotions.
Loved it Monu....aNd really glad to see u writing after so long!
@Alpana- Thank u Alps.. love.. <3 <3
@Andy- Thank u so much.. Visited ur blog Andy.. very nice poet u are.. following u now on.. ^_^
@Rajeev- Thank u very much bro.. keep visiing.. :)
@Jerly.. Trying to overcome writer's block.. ;) thank u for commenting.. ;) <3
this was so cute......beautiful....u ve become like mumbai's rains.....u come unexpctedly aftr long breaks n shower brilliance in ur post....:)....loved it...:)
Wonderful.
@Vaisakhi.. hehe.. thank u thank u :) <3
@Janu.. thnx dear :)
Wowwwwwwwwwww such a lovely feeeling, lovely friend like you can write only.........:)
Wowwww!! Wonderful poem...full of emotions...loved it..:):)
@Mohinee-- so sweet of u to say that.. <3 <3 thank u sooo soooo much.. :)
@hema- thnx Hema.. <3 U r too a wonderful person.. :)
Hello Monu.
Just returning to say thank you for following my blog. I appreciate it.
I always like to return the kindness & am now following you too. I'm looking forward to reading more from you, my friend.
See you soon!
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn
Cute poem
Beautiful poem expressing in-depth feelings. :)
CG MAGIC
nice one.
Cheers!
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@Andy.. thank u so much for a confidence booster friend.. u r always most welcome.. :)
@SparkleMeZen- thank u.. :)
@Abhishek.. thnx for the compliment bro.. :)
@Sub.. Thank u so much.. visited urs.. :)
A very beautiful poem on what friendship is all about....simply adored it :)
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