Nirmal jheel jo thi kabhi yahaan,
Uska paani sookh gaya hai kahaan,
Puche tujhse yeh saara jahaan,
Kar sake toh kar apne shabdon mein bayaan.
Kyun tu kaate sheetal chaaya,
Kahaan hai woh paidon ka saaya,
Neeche jiskey maine bachpann tha bitaaya,
Qatl-e-aam kar uska tune kya paaya?
Dhuaan chaaron aur tune hai failaaya,
Shuddh hawaa ka starr hai ghataaya,
Baadh, toofaan, bhukamp ko badhaaya,
Dushmann prakriti ko tune hi banaaya.
Taapmaan nahin badhaa hai iss dharti ka,
Badhaa hai toh uska rosh halka sa,
Apne matlab ke liye jo tune hai cheena,
Soot sameyt bhugtaan hai uska abb bharnaa.
Abb bhi waqt hai jaag aye insaan,
Kar sampoorna manav jaati ka kalyaan,
Kahin hamara mitt na jaaye nishaan,
Lauta dey prakriti ko uska khoya huaa sammaan.
-Monu Awalla
16 comments:
mast moni ekdum casual n easy wrds bahut sahi hai
thnx nanu cho chweeeet!!
Hmm..so gud that you think of Prakriti and mean what you say! Did you hear a good news, the ozone hole is mending due to the phasing out of the depleting compounds since '87 and that it may get to pre '80 levels by 2040. Efforts are paying off and that's a relief! keep up the social change inspiring poetry. I like such stuff. One of the things I had liked in your profile was your wish to do something for the environment. Hope you will think out some ingenious solutions being an engineer(like I had hoped in my earlier post on Environment science remenber?)
The concerns on global warming are aptly said in your poem. There is another good news regarding efforts to counter it with biofuels. It is in todays paper, the possibility of producing diesel(low carbon) from plant wastes through genetically engineered E coli(1 step easy process). This if comes through in the two years as specified, then it does look to me like something that is feasible and might be more visible to us than just in print
Thnx n I also got delighted after seeing that u r updating urself with every positive news on this topic.
Global warming is a serious issue these days and nice to see a youngsters feeling on the same. Good work.
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nice thot..!!! gr8 work n keep goin..!
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superb vocabulary in the poem. nice thought too. difficult to make out wheither thought supports the poem or the poem strengthens the thought. keep it up & best wishes frm me.
@Kunal- Thnx kunal for one of d best compliment..:)
wow! Superb!! Ultimate!! share it on FB ..jagaoo logo ko...so rahe hai sab :D :)
And I am fan of your beautiful words, your words are always perfect at the perfect place, which makes it so pleasant to read.
And this poem is very effective and true too!
Keep it up dear! :)
thank you for prakriti hi jeevan my son won third prize for hind recetation , mulund mumbai glenda dsouza
Brilliant one monu n congrates a tonne:)
I'm glad I helped your child in any ways... Thank you for stopping by... Keep visiting.. :)
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