Without saying at all,
They hurt a lot,
Without hurting at all,
Why they enjoyed,
Being a sadist,
Why they enjoyed,
My each and every fall...
To whom I thought,
The most intimate,
Tried me to knockout,
Tried me to checkmate,
Someone go,
And tell them kindly,
I felt elated,
On their winning date...
I expected a lot,
Out of back-stabbers,
I expected a lot,
Out of grave-diggers,
Is it because-
I laid my faith blindly?
Or is it because-
I played the games fairly?
I faced a thunderbolt,
Which left me in pain,
Which put me in vain,
With only tears- as my gain...
I opened my eyes,
To realize the fact,
I'm not the same,
Why should I react.
Yes, the best answer-
I have in store,
Is to live happily,
More than ever before!!!
-Monu Awalla
18 comments:
Got depth... MAybe sad poems tend to have depth but especially the first stanza and the last stanza are very catching
thank u so much for feeling my words.. Yea u r rgt, sad poems have their own depth.. special thnx for pointing out the catching portion :)
Awesome poem.....i am totally impressed!
I'm overwhelmed Nishi- U made my day for sure :) Thanks for following me!
Keep in touch :)
Beautifully Expressed the pain .
When things go wrong, happens the same as we look back and see..
Nice blog :)
Thank u very much for complementing both my poem & my blog :)
Thnx for following too..
To be very honest- Ur cute blog helped me to fetch some idea to improve mine :)
Wow!
I am happy that I helped you anyway! :)
I liked the last para. :)
A love proposal is beautifully written. I enjoy reading it. :)
Best wishes. :)
@Chandrika, I'm happy that u liked the last para.. :) thanks for complimenting the poem on love proposal too..
Keep visiting.. :)
touching moni
Thank u nanu ;)
nicely written
hope i made her to read this
it really hurts
Nicely written..
thnx for commenting geeth :)
really a gudone moni!! frm: vandana
O thnx Vandu..:)
There is so much pain reflecting in ur post...keep smiling!
thnx for reading it Geeta.
Sure I'll..:)
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