"With love- You & me"


The two of us,
In the field of roses,
Under sweet smell,
We remain closest,
I plucked A rose,
Straight away,
And placed it gently,
Within your shines,
Now the rose looked beautiful...

Near waterfall,
We sat and chat,
Little drops of mist,
Rested on us,
With blowing breeze,
I offered you my warm,
The rest is then,
Became a dream,
And we vacationed,
In each other's arms...
-Monu Awalla

18 comments:

Unknown said...

Nice creation Moni. really superb.

Monu Awalla said...

Thnx Mahi...:)

Jerly said...

sweet one....

Monu Awalla said...

@Jerly- & ur comment is even sweeter..thnx Jerly..:)

UD said...

Lovely one...

Monu Awalla said...

Thnx Udit... :)

Anonymous said...

Jamavat che Monu,
super
lage raho

Gabani

Monu Awalla said...

Thanks Vishal, Thank u so much yaar for such a beautiful comment...:) I promise I'll take ur words, "lagey raho" for granted..:) Thank u once again :)

Kirti..... said...

Hi ....
Really...there is only ROSE who can make us realize and understand,what love is.

Monu Awalla said...

@Kirti- Yea u r right Kirti.. Rose is sumthin we always associate wid love :)
Thnx for commenting & following me..
:)

Lathavijayakumar said...

Near waterfall,
We sat and chat,
Little drops of mist,
Rested on us,
With blowing breeze,
I offered you my warm,
The rest is then,
Became a dream,
And we vacationed,
In each other's arms...

beautifully expressed your luve and affection

Monu Awalla said...

@Lathavijayakumar- Thnx for the compliment.. keep visiting :)

nancy said...

lovely

Monu Awalla said...

Thnx Nanu :)

geeth said...

So sweet..

Monu Awalla said...

Thank u Geeth for calling my poem-Sweet :)

Geeta Singh said...

wow ! lovely poem..:)

Monu Awalla said...

Thnx Geeta.. U made me smile.. :)

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