The two of us,
In the field of roses,
Under sweet smell,
We remain closest,
I plucked A rose,
Straight away,
And placed it gently,
Within your shines,
Now the rose looked beautiful...
Near waterfall,
We sat and chat,
Little drops of mist,
Rested on us,
With blowing breeze,
I offered you my warm,
The rest is then,
Became a dream,
And we vacationed,
In each other's arms...
-Monu Awalla
18 comments:
Nice creation Moni. really superb.
Thnx Mahi...:)
sweet one....
@Jerly- & ur comment is even sweeter..thnx Jerly..:)
Lovely one...
Thnx Udit... :)
Jamavat che Monu,
super
lage raho
Gabani
Thanks Vishal, Thank u so much yaar for such a beautiful comment...:) I promise I'll take ur words, "lagey raho" for granted..:) Thank u once again :)
Hi ....
Really...there is only ROSE who can make us realize and understand,what love is.
@Kirti- Yea u r right Kirti.. Rose is sumthin we always associate wid love :)
Thnx for commenting & following me..
:)
Near waterfall,
We sat and chat,
Little drops of mist,
Rested on us,
With blowing breeze,
I offered you my warm,
The rest is then,
Became a dream,
And we vacationed,
In each other's arms...
beautifully expressed your luve and affection
@Lathavijayakumar- Thnx for the compliment.. keep visiting :)
lovely
Thnx Nanu :)
So sweet..
Thank u Geeth for calling my poem-Sweet :)
wow ! lovely poem..:)
Thnx Geeta.. U made me smile.. :)
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