Kab tum bas gaye mere ehsaason mein,
Hokar juda karke mujhe tanha yun,
Muskura rahe ho tum ...
Kisi anjaan zindagi mein.
Nadiyon mein kabhi behta tha jo pani,
Ab meri aankhon me chalka karta hai,
Isi bahaane yaad kar liya karte hain tumhe,
Bichdi yaadon ke pal jo yaad aate hain humey.
Hum to ek jhalak dekh liya karte hain tumhari,
Guldastey me lagey kisi ek phool mein,
Chanchal hawaa me behkar khushboo tumhari,
Mehka deti hai mere iss baijaan dil ko,
Jis dil me na thi kabhi koi jaan,
Ab dhadakta hai to sirf tumhari hi shaan mey.
Zindagi hai meri ek pat-jhad ka mausam,
Thi kabhi jisme bahaar hi bahaar,
Woh mausam firse kyun nahin barasta,
Gumsum ho kho gaya hai kahaan?
Saare jahaan ko dhoond liya hai maine,
Nahin dhoonda to sirf ek tumhara hi jahaan!
Sapna mera ek sapna hi reh gaya,
Laut jaati hain yeh lehren kinaaron se jaise,
Tumhari yaadon se kinaara kar...
Mein bhi laut gaya.
-Monu Awalla
4 comments:
I read your comment today wanting to know my view on your poetry.Thanks for the importance you have given to my opinion! I think this poem has got depth. You are richer in terms of the words you use in Hindi..In English poetry my suggestion is that though rhyming is important, it should not be at the cost of grammer. To know my taste in poetry I would be pleased if you read my 2 poems in the blog posts on "A time for everything' and 'Movimg on"
Thanks jerly for displaying exactly what your opinion is... I really really appreciate the way you commented on my poems... Always stay in touch!
With regards,
Monu.
Ooo lala....sache ashiq ki sachi ashiqi ka dard...well penned monua....u r nt artist by chance..its by pain n love..;)
Keep flowing... Love-Mani:)
thnx mani u r a gem.. love u honey <3
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