When I loved you



In the world of billions,
Only one you are,
You are the story only,
I heard so far…

You are the music,
That touches my ears,
As if I'm listening,
Since ages and years…

I saved for you,
The air I inhaled,
To blow with feeling,
In the flute of love...

The source of power,
yes you are-
That keeps,
My heartbeat ticking,
To make me stand,
On my feet…

I can still reach you,
While completely blind folded,
Without meeting you-
In person,
I spent with you,
The whole vacation…

13 comments:

Alpana Jaiswal said...

True love does not worry about the distance between, for the heart and soul travels through one's words.
Beautifully written Monu...

melissatandoc said...

Oooo I wonder who she is ;) It seems so real :D

Janaki Nagaraj said...

Wow...a kalpanic love katha?

irfan said...

Monu bhai...this one doesn't seem to be a fiction....whats the matter...::P

Lovely...:))

Manee Bhatia said...

Aww!! I loved ths one monu..so v sweet...:)

Keep penning more,...;)

Love
Mani

Ansh Saransh1978 said...

monnnnuuuuu, it is love that changes our each aspect of looking into life. each moment becomes so wonderful and beautiful. you are right.....all 'in the flute of love'.

loved it:)

Simran kaur said...

Wow!
Five super like hits* to this beautiful poetry :)

Loved ..when you loved me ;) :)

Tameka (BloggerPoet) said...

Monu, this was lovely. Sometimes love must live within us for a while before our loved one can receive and see it. So beautiful!


http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2011/12/lyric-fire-my-first-this-moment-post-.html

Jerly said...

Real Good Monu. Sweet poem :)

Andy said...

Hello.
Love knows no time or distance & can creep into our hearts wherever we are.
These are some sweet lines from you Monu.
Very nicely penned.
Thanks for sharing.

For ref:
An Inscription Of Love

Shreya said...

Lovely poem, Monu :) Nice picture selection.

http://www.iredeem.blogspot.com/

Kriti said...

Beautifully written ...

Portia Burton said...

sweeeeet!
-Portia

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