Shattering off-
A love cocoon,
A butterfly I'm,
Feeling now,
Free to hop,
From flower to flower,
To intercept and inhale,
The Love pheromones…
Into the flights,
All alone,
Where predators stay,
Eyeing on you,
To put an end,
The free rein…
They didn't know,
How I broke,
My love cocoon,
Only to become,
Resilient against,
The wind of foes,
And the flying daggers,
Just to overcome,
The enmity scorched…
12 comments:
I read it again n again to feel d depth....its beautiful monu...less speaks more....the way u have explored. Well done!!
Love
Mani
And you tell me that you are not in love,I don't believe you Monu...such feelings will not come if you don't feel love...Beautifully written.
awesome lines buddy
Thanks Mani for getting an insight right.. <3
love is in the air alwayz.. just inhale it :D
thanx for going thru it <3
Thnx for going thru it Nands <3
Wow! Monu, that last stanza was really something yaar. coming out of the cocoon and learning to handle the bitter world! Good Job
recocooning after coming out of the cocoon
Thnx Jerls.. feeling awesome becuz u lykd it.. ;) thank u vry much indeed... :)
lol.. :D
Hello Monu.
The ending of this was most powerful. You chose the perfect image too.
Very nicely penned, my friend!
Thanks for sharing. Thanks also for your kind words on my latest post. I truly appreciate them.
A Flower And A Tear
Oh cutie little blue bird lol...
Oh anyways, I like the title and the theme of your poetry. Subtly done...I like that freedom that the butterfly felt. The presence of predators out to get her is very real. Knowing how to come to terms with ones fragility and strength is beautiful Monu :)
You continue to surprise me with your works :)
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