My English Poem On Emotions Of A Student studying in a boarding School- "A Child's Note"


Though my mouth is tiny winy,
But my words will not be same,
O lord! Give me some power,
Feeling here as if I am person lame...

In the name of my future,
You chucked my childhood far away,
Though my shell has become tough,
My inner self is still wet-clay...

I've been treated like a robot,
Given no freedom to enjoy my way,
Yes I laugh too often here,
Just to suppress my tears all day...

It's been to me a prettified jail,
A fast track highway touching deep dale,
All I can send from here to you,
My tears, my feelings by posting a mail...

From the purest string of all relations,
You never produced melodious music,
Instead you produced fake self-esteem,
Only to fulfill your own-sown dream...

All I wait for the month of may,
Summer holidays- all they say,
The actual time when my dreams come true,
After prolonged patience and pray...

With you I want to spend a day,
With your parenting- I want to play,
Let me explore the land near you,
Let me discover my internal gay...

No punishment is so severe,
But to stay away from home,
No more torture I could bear,
I need you- Dad & Mom...

One day your seed will become a fruit,
After all you gave it a fertilizer-like treat,
But have you ever wondered- my dear parents,
This fruit would then be bitter or sweet?
- Monu Awalla

9 comments:

UD said...

AWESOME!

Monu Awalla said...

Thanks udit...

Wanderer said...

this is ur best work till date. keep it up man, u surely have some nice writing skills.

buddy can u write jst 6-8 lines about love n war.

Monu Awalla said...

thank u soooo mch yaar fo sch a nyc compliment... will cal u to knw d details of ur wish fo 6-8 lines on
"love n war"

Jerly said...

very touching, Monu

Monu Awalla said...

thnx Jerly for ur encouragement..:)

Geeta Singh said...

no more torture thats simply awesome...write more..well dn:)

Monu Awalla said...

Sure, I'll Geeta. Thank u very much indeed :)

Vaisakhi said...

lovely write...very touchin....:)

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